Three people killed a teenager in the style of the movie Severance. In Great Yarmouth, Nortfolk they doused 17 year old Simon Everitt in petrol then tied him to a tree and then burned him alive.
The three people responcible are 40 year old Maria Chandler, 25 year old Jimi-Lee Stewart, and 20 year old Jonathan Clarke.
This was all because of a Love triangle between Clarke, Stewart ,Everitt and 19 year old Fiona Statham. Clarke, Chandler, and Stewart were concicted for the murder of Everitt.
Hi Dennis - you certainly seem to have got the hang of this blogging. The general setup looks good; therefore I can only give feedback on the writing itself. Do please ensure that your entries are long enough (some of the earlier ones were quite long but the recent ones are fairly short).
BeantwoordenVerwijderenMy comments and corrections in [brackets]. As you can see I think it's mostly a case of typos and small oversights.
Three people killed a teenager in the style of the movie Severance. In Great Yarmouth, Nortfolk they doused 17 year old Simon Everitt in petrol then tied him to a tree and then burned him alive.
The three people respon[s]ible are 40 year old Maria Chandler, 25 year old Jimi-Lee Stewart, and 20 year old Jonathan Clarke.
This was all because of a [l]ove triangle between Clarke, Stewart ,Everitt and 19 year old Fiona Statham [wouldn't that be a quadrangle?]. Clarke, Chandler, and Stewart were con[v]icted for the murder of Everitt.